The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate various things that make
people
under 30 and over 30 most happy.
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Overall
, it can be seen that work achievements make most adults happy in both charts. Linking Words
However
, other factors bottom out.
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According to
the materials, achievements at work Linking Words
prevailing
in both circle diagrams, at 31% and 32% respectively. A Wrong verb form
prevailed
further
22% Linking Words
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doing hobbies for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
under 30 and 24% for Use synonyms
over
30. It is Correct pronoun usage
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also
worth mentioning that having a good appearance and financial security is Linking Words
also
significant for Linking Words
people
, reaching 18% and 20% respectively.
It can be seen from the data that travelling is less important, 15%, and other factors hit a low of 14 Use synonyms
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
people
under 30. As for the elder group, being with a family reaches a peak of 14%, Use synonyms
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other factors are only Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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