The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate various things that make
people
under 30 and over 30 most happy.
Overall
, it can be seen that work achievements make most adults happy in both charts. However
, other factors bottom out.
According to
the materials, achievements at work prevailing
in both circle diagrams, at 31% and 32% respectively. A Wrong verb form
prevailed
further
22% is
doing hobbies for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
under 30 and 24% for over
30. It is Correct pronoun usage
those over
also
worth mentioning that having a good appearance and financial security is also
significant for people
, reaching 18% and 20% respectively.
It can be seen from the data that travelling is less important, 15%, and other factors hit a low of 14 percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
people
under 30. As for the elder group, being with a family reaches a peak of 14%, whereas
other factors are only of
10%.Change preposition
apply
Submitted by alii.viisl on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼