Nowadays new technologies
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crucial part of our
lives
. Some
people
argue that technological advancement
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changed their
lives
positively, at the same
time
others feel that technology
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to control their
lives
. In
this
essay, I will overview both opinions and give my own in the conclusion.
To begin
with, technological developments
helpsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to make
people
's
lives
easier. Currently, it is hard to realise our
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without computers and smartphones .
For example
, three or four decades earlier
people
couldn't imagine communicating with
people
from different countries
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be so easy , but for modern
it is nothing special.
Also
,
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the invention
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of home gadgets helps
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their
time
and energy and spend
this
time
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
still have an opinion that new technologies have a negative influence on our lifestyle
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moreover
, control it.
This
is because today more and more individuals, especially youngsters, spend their
time
online , rather than
communicationgCorrect your spelling
communicating
communication
in real life.
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are influenced
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they see or read
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social media . Some items , like washing
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or vacuum
cleanerFix the agreement mistake
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are now vital. Individuals become addicted
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technologiesFix the agreement mistake
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,
In conclusion,
although
people
today became dependent
fromChange preposition
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some technological items, my
opinionsFix the agreement mistake
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is that there are more positive aspects , like convenience and
time
-saving, than negative. It is a personal choice of everyone ,
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gadgets to make our life easier , or be controlled or addicted.