Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays new technologies
is
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the
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crucial part of our
lives
. Some
people
argue that technological advancement
have
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changed their
lives
positively, at the same
time
others feel that technology
start
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to control their
lives
. In
this
essay, I will overview both opinions and give my own in the conclusion.
To begin
with, technological developments
helps
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help
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to make
people
's
lives
easier. Currently, it is hard to realise our
live
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without computers and smartphones .
For example
, three or four decades earlier
people
couldn't imagine communicating with
people
from different countries
will
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would
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be so easy , but for modern
people
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people,
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it is nothing special.
Also
,
invention
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the invention
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of home gadgets helps
housewife's
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housewife
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safe
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their
time
and energy and spend
this
time
for
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self treatment
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
still have an opinion that new technologies have a negative influence on our lifestyle
,
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and, moreover
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moreover
, control it.
This
is because today more and more individuals, especially youngsters, spend their
time
online , rather than
communicationg
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communicating
communication
in real life.
Population
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are influenced
with
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information
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the information
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they see or read
in
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on
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social media . Some items , like washing
machine
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machines
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or vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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are now vital. Individuals become addicted
from
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technologies
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technology
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, In conclusion,
although
people
today became dependent
from
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on
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some technological items, my
opinions
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opinion
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is that there are more positive aspects , like convenience and
time
-saving, than negative. It is a personal choice of everyone ,
use
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gadgets to make our life easier , or be controlled or addicted.
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