You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Congratulate him/her for also being accepted •Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate •Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together
Hello Rana,
I am writing to congratulate you for accepting the offer letter .
Additionally
,I want to let you know that the flight tickets are confirmed.
First and foremost, I would like to discuss about
the accommodation.One of my family Remove the preposition
apply
member
who lives in Fix the agreement mistake
members
paris
is looking for two tenants.They invited me to stay with them.I felt Change the capitalization
Paris
this
will
be a good idea to share the condo with them .So that I might not feel homesick during the initial days .Wrong verb form
would
Moreover
, they will help me in finding the
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a
part time
job.If you are comfortable you can accompany me.
After attending Add a hyphen
part-time
the
college we have Correct article usage
apply
lot
of activities to participateCorrect article usage
a lot
.
We can take part in Change preposition
in.
Trecking
,Swimming and Cycling .All these events are hosted by the College.Correct your spelling
Tracking
Additionally
, the College has the best Library in the City .We can have good
time over Add an article
a good
their
.I'm feeling very excited to Replace the word
there
persue
my undergrad in Paris.
I'm looking forward Correct your spelling
pursue
for
your reply.
Yours lovingly
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to
vikram
Change the capitalization
Vikram
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task response
Ensure that the response covers all aspects of the prompt. Make sure to congratulate your friend and ask about being roommates and discuss possible activities in detail.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization of ideas and use appropriate linking words to create a more cohesive and coherent letter. Additionally, include a proper greeting and closing for the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite