You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter related to my Apple timepiece .Unfortunately, I lost on the Train. I do not know what should I do now.
To start with, yesterday, I was travelling from Surrey to Vancouver around 11 a.m.
. I lost my precious timepiece the train. I wore the wristwatch but I do not know how the watch fell down. The series of Apple watches is 8 and the colour of the watch is light pink as well and the lock of the timepiece is golden colour. I already fixed my picture on the screen. The value of the item is $699 now. But the wristwatch was gifted by my mother that’s why it is valuable for me.
Correct your spelling
a.m
Furthermore
, when I reached my destination at the waterfront station the time was 11 a.m. When I left the track after that I noticed that I lost my wristwatch on the train. After that, I called transit security and explained my whole incident. They suggested that,
I should write a letter to you.
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Moreover
, I think that the company should check the trains which I used at that time as well as
check the CCTV cameras which are installed in trains. It is my humble request.
Thank u
Yours Faithfully,
Gagandeep kaur
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Kaur
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