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The process shows how waste is sorted for recycling.

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The given diagram illustrates the process of sorting different types of
waste
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 for recycling. It can be clearly seen that each kind of
waste
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 is treated differently
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their
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 materials.
However
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, all
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 is sorted beginning with being put through shredders and ending with being
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 into some specific collectors. The process starts with
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is
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 put through a special machine called
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a “shredder”
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 to be cut into smaller species.
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paper and plastic
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 is
clasified
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classified
 using primary air and
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, compacted. Other
waste
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 continues going through the next stage of being
seperated
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separated
 by
magnet
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. At
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 step, only
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 made of steel, cans and iron is collected. In terms of more complex
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, they are scanned through trammel screens.
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 time, glass, food and non-ferrous metals are kept and put in the collector. The rest of
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waste
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the waste
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 including aluminum, wood, rubber and plastic is gone through the second air classifier to be sorted.
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 completes the process of sorting for recycling.
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