The line graph shows the regional household recycling percentages in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the regional household recycling percentages in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The line graph illustrates how different domestic
waste's
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waste was
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recycled in the
UK
,
France
, and
Germany
from 2005 to 2015. The recycling rates of the
UK
and
Germany
showed a steady but significant rise over the
period
,
while
the percentage of recycled waste in
France
experienced a downward trend.
Firstly
, In 2005, the recycling rates of the
UK
and
Germany
were nearly 35% and 20% respectively.
Germany
's
rate
increased sharply throughout the
period
, exceeding
France
's
rate
in 2009 and reaching almost 60%
in
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at
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the end of the
period
.
In addition
, the proportion of recycled waste in the
UK
grew to 40% in 2007 and
then
remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011, it experienced a rapid surge to more
then
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50% and
also
continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.
On the other hand
, In early 2005, the recycling
rate
of
France
(50%) was the highest among these three countries.
However
, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013.
Then
there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
in contrast
,
France
's recycling
rate
was the lowest
in
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at
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the end of the
period
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, france, germany, period, rate with synonyms.
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