The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the regional household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
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The line graph illustrates how different domestic waste was recycled in the UK,
France
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, and Germany from 2005 to 2015. The recycling rates
of
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British and German showed a steady but significant rise over the period,
while
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the percentage of recycled waste in
France
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experienced a downward trend.
Firstly
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, In 2005, the recycling rates of the UK and Germany were nearly 35% and 20% respectively. Germany's estimate increased sharply throughout the years, exceeding
France
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's proportion in 2009 and reaching almost 60%
at the end
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of the duration.
In addition
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, the proportion of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007 and
then
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remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011, it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and
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continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.
On the other hand
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, In early 2005, the recycling percentage of
France
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(50%) was the highest among these three countries.
However
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, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013.
Then
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there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
in contrast
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,
France
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's recycling amount was the lowest
at the end
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of the term.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household recycling rates
  • regional
  • line graph
  • countries
  • between
  • overall trends
  • changes
  • compare
  • ten-year period
  • differences
  • reasons
  • summarize
  • comment
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