The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the average

prices

for closing certain precious metals between 2013 and 2021.

Overall

, closing

prices

for

palladium

showed

significant

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rise,

while

prices

for closing of platinum declined over the given period.

Prices

for gold stayed stable until the slight increase in 2019. In 2013, the metal with the highest closing payment was platinum. Between 2013 and 2021 the graph generally decreased, having little increase only in 2021. Payment for gold closing was the second highest in 2013.

Prices

stayed between 1000 and 1500 dollars per oz. from 2013 to 2019. It reached its

peaks

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in 2020 and 2021. Gold

prices

were surpassing platinum and

palladium

prices

between 2015 and 2018.

Palladium

closing payments fluctuated from 2013 to 2017. After the year 2017, the

prices

rose significantly

overpassing

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other

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the other

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two categories.

Palladium

payment reached the maximum in 2021 with around 2450 dollars per oz.

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