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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ..................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #•give #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses
Dear Kim, I am writing to inform
that
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you that
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 on holiday I
be
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will be
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in
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on
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 vacation. You already agreed
that
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apply
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to take
of
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off
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 my pet and take after my house. I will come back on January 2
only
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with only
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 4 days
vacation
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of vacation
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. In case of
the
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an
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 emergency
happen
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this
 is my number to contact
with
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apply
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so that I
will
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can
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response
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respond
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 to you quickly. If I
am not answer
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do not answer
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 your call immediately call the police or medical team. For taking care of my baby pet, he is the one who
wake
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wakes
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 you up
then
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apply
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after he
want
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wants
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 her breastfast to eat. When he finished his breakfast he
want
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wanted
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 to
a
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apply
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walk in the
garder
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garden
 or play. Around 9 in the morning is his bathing time he
sleep
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sleeps
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. The other thing is the household is when you use the toilet and
other area
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another area
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 clean after use
,
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 so that it will not look messy.
Secondly
, the bed of my pet
an
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and
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 all his
need
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needs
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. Take care, Austina
Submitted by kimberlygumban on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • Thank you
  • I am writing to
  • Housesitting
  • Pet-sitting
  • Responsible
  • Phone number
  • Emergency contact
  • Feeding
  • Walking
  • Playtime
  • Cleaning
  • Watering plants
  • Taking out the trash
  • Collecting mail
  • Security
  • Well wishes
  • Best regards
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