The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
The column provides data about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
In general, the data made from
activities
of Correct article usage
the activities
people
between 30 and 50 years old and most
lovely thing to spend time Correct article usage
the most
is
reading among persons from Change preposition
on is
this
list of countries. However
, music
is least
popular activity. Correct article usage
the least
Also
, there is no information from other pastimes except reading. Only americans
love Change the capitalization
Americans
music
.
In this
table
we can see that Japanese are only read and most Add a comma
table,
people
that
read in Correct pronoun usage
who
this
age range are from Japan. Australians
most likely activity is watching TV and least likely is sleep and Change noun form
Australians'
Australian's
music
. Chinese people
spend most time for
Change preposition
apply
readind
and hobbies, Correct your spelling
reading
also
they just do not spend time for
Change preposition
on
music
. However
, Change preposition
for americans
americans
one of the most famous Change the capitalization
Americans
activity
is Fix the agreement mistake
activities
music
, TV and Beach. In Canada, people
interested
in sports but nobody Add a missing verb
are interested
interested
in Add a missing verb
is interested
beach
. Evidently, Add an article
the beach
koreans
Change the capitalization
Koreans
also
love to read and not
so interested in Add a missing verb
are not
music
. In England, Correct article usage
a persons'
persons'
Change noun form
person's
favorite
pastime is reading as same as in Change the spelling
favourite
france
.Change the capitalization
France
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