some people that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime

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problem around the world,

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of

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, others strongly believe that there are better options to dwindle

crime

. There are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now. Arguably, there could be reasons why longer

prison

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.

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, spending a long time leads to

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opportunity

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for the

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service to rehabilitate a prisoner. For instance,

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, who committed

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such

as assault

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he or she was caught by

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then

longer

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given to him or her in order to be sure they can be re-educated not to re-offend.

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legislates

low

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in

regards

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to long

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of

prison

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more and more offenders have

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from

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.

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world

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countries,

crime

of life is steadily

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day by day

due to

longer

prison

. Foremost among other challenges appear to be more issues of the world condition. There are numerous penalties for criminals

such

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taxes

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tax

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or

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, by which I mean that all

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notions

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notion

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can establish some kind of fines if people commit

crime

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.

Consequently

, gangsters are scared

from

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crime

,

this

is because they

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not money for pay to

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. It is true that

seldom

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criminals

do not

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fear

from

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this

kind of penalty

therefore

all states ought to create extraordinary punishment like perhaps

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depends on

sort

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of

crime

. Having punishment of death in some countries, nobody committee

crime

in order to peace of

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, In a nutshell, I strongly feel that all countries should impose

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for

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crime

because it can be more beneficial to our life.

However

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sometimes longer

prison

is given at the expense of heavy

crime

.