WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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From the middle of 1900's the
population
in a village
located near London called Chorleywood has increased it's
Replace the word
its
population
gradually. Below map will discuss the divelopment
of the Correct your spelling
development
village
.
Main
road Change the article
The main
is
the only Wrong verb form
was
trasportation
method Correct your spelling
transportation
wich is
the Verb problem
that
village
people had before 1900. And there
were only Correct word choice
There
few
Correct article usage
a few
village
people who lived in Chorleywood village
from 1868 to 1883.
As the first majior cunstruction
Chorleywood station and the Correct your spelling
major construction
railwaay
has Correct your spelling
railway
railways
cunstructed
in 1909. Correct your spelling
constructed
Moreover
the Add a comma
Moreover,
population
around the station area also
has
increased from 1883 to 1922.
The Unnecessary verb
apply
village
population
has upgraded from a conciderable
amount in between the year 1922 - 1994 . More than 50% of the Correct your spelling
considerable
population
has covered
Add a missing verb
been covered
in
Change preposition
apply
betwen
these 62 years. Except Correct your spelling
between
of
Change preposition
for
population
increasment
, Correct your spelling
increase
building
of Add an article
the building
motor way
in 1970 Correct your spelling
motorway
also
a highlighted Add a missing verb
was also
devolopment
of the Correct your spelling
development
village
.
By the year 1994
the Add a comma
1994,
village
had a good population
with a Golf course , a station and a railway, and newly
built motorway.Correct article usage
a newly
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