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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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From the middle of 1900's the
population
 in a
village
 located near London called Chorleywood has increased
it's
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its
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population
 gradually. Below map will discuss the
divelopment
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development
 of the
village
.
Main
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 road
is
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was
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 the only
trasportation
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transportation
 method
wich is
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that
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 the
village
 people had before 1900.
And there
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There
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 were only
few
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a few
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village
 people who lived in Chorleywood
village
 from 1868 to 1883. As the first
majior cunstruction
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major construction
 Chorleywood station and the
railwaay
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railway
railways
 has
cunstructed
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constructed
 in 1909.
Moreover
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 the
population
 around the station area
also
has
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increased from 1883 to 1922. The
village
population
 has upgraded from a
conciderable
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considerable
 amount in between the year 1922 - 1994 . More than 50% of the
population
 has
covered
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been covered
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in
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apply
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betwen
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between
 these 62 years. Except
of
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for
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population
increasment
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increase
,
building
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the building
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 of
motor way
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motorway
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 in 1970
also
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was also
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 a highlighted
devolopment
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development
 of the
village
. By the year
1994
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1994,
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 the
village
 had a good
population
 with a Golf course , a station and a railway, and
newly
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a newly
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 built motorway.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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