In my country, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Plastic
container has been a subtitution
packaging for food and drink nowadays. Many manufacturers use Correct your spelling
substitute
this
product
since it is very convenience
as a wrapper. Replace the word
convenient
On the other hand
, it has many shortcomings and one of them is pollution. This
essay will discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
The production of plastic
increased rapidly since a lot of factories use it as a container. It is a very cost-effective product
and high in durability. Moreover
, the weight of plastic
that is
very light make
it easier to deliver and will reduce the delivery cost. Change the verb form
makes
For instance
, a chocolate bar can last
longer when it is placed in a
Remove the article
apply
plastic
packaging and very
lightweight to carry around. It is a very useful Add a missing verb
is very
product
that can be used for many purpose
.
On the other side, Change to a plural noun
purposes
plastic
is one of the most materials
Correct word choice
common materials
that
commonly found in a trash can. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
enviromental
impact of Correct your spelling
environmental
this
material is somewhat high since it cover
most of the landfills. Many communities are Change the verb form
covers
concerning
Wrong verb form
concerned
in
Change preposition
about
this
problem and starting to find a way to make a better environment. For example
, one of the local organization
, Sustainable Work Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
is
started to work on finding an action on how to reuse the waste and make it a better Verb problem
has
product
. They make a product
from scratch by using plastic
bottle caps into an astonishing art piece.
To conclude
, containers that are made from plastic
have many purpose
to keep a Change to a plural noun
purposes
product
fresh and versatile. Although
it has many shortcomings, people can recycle this
product
to prevent the environment of
being worse.Change preposition
from
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