The bar chart below shows the percentage of different countries population aged 65 years and over in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.

The bar chart below shows the

percentage

of different

countries

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population aged 65 years and over in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.

Overall

, there is a rise in all countries over the period.

It is clear that

in each country

percentage

was less than 20

percent

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however

in

forecast

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2035 it will

be

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move upward

more

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than 20

moreover

25

percent

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. Starting with the highest prediction, Wales`

percentage

of

population

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the population

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will increase

more

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than 25% in 2035, considering that in 1985 Wales had the elevated result (more than 15%), it is

expected

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result. Scotland will have

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second place in 2035 after Wales, for the reason that it will have exactly 25

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. In other countries

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England,

UK

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and Northern Ireland

percentage

of

population

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the population

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will have the same index. In 1985 England and UK

additionally

had the same

percent

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(15%) but Northern Ireland had less than 15%.