In modern life, it is no longer acceptable to use animals as food or in other products, like clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is
unacceoptable
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unacceptable
acceptable
to use
animals
as a meal or in other items,
such
as clothes and treatment. In my opinion, I partially agree that
creatures
must enjoy life without being killed.
However
, depending on plants will
make
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issues
such
as
low
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a low
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protein diet. On the one hand,
animals
should have the
rights
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right
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to live free. Each country must invest in products
that
is
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friendly
with
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to
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animals
. Globally there
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is
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many
farms
that
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is
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designed to slaughter
animals
, and each farm at least
have
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thousands of
creatures
.
Therefore
, many types of
animals
such
as chickens, sheep and cows are only living to provide food or items. Personally, building big
farms
specially
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for
salughtering
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slaughtering
cow
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cows
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or chickens or any other kind is a bad thing, and governments around the world should be responsible for closing these types of
farms
.
On the other hand
,
prevent
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animals
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animal
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products will cause
lack
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of material. Every
items
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around us is made from different kinds of
creatures
including nutrition. Eating only vegan food will
effect
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our bodies in the long term, as humans we need
protien
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protein
sources to gain
our
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energy.
Protien
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Protein
can be found in any
types
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type
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of meat. In my viewpoint, killing
animals
for food is not a bad thing as long as the amount of killed
creatures
are
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not high. In the end,
governemts
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governments
around the world must prevent big
animals
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animal
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farms
because they have the
rights
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right
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to live without being killed.
However
, our bodies require
protien
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protein
which
found
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in the meat of the
animals
.
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