The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

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four clinics each week of a hospital over the six years since 2010. It can be seen that the number of the three categories of

clinic

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clinics

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such

as Birth Control, Eye and Diabetic increased

while

Dental remained unchanged. Despite the fact that (

Although

) Birth Control and Diabetic rates had an upward dynamic the eye issues became most common over the period. There were almost 250

visits

related to birth control in 2010, and it

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an upward trend till 2012 with nearly 275

visits

,

however

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the figures fell significantly in 2014 to 175

visits

, but the numbers

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to 250 visitors in 2016.

In contrast

,

visits

to the doctor concerning eye issues started lower at 125, grew negligibly over the next two years and it has risen steadily in the next four years to a high number of

visits

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350. Diabetic and dental

visits

were consistently less common, with the

numbers

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number

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of 60, which has risen steadily to 100, and finishing the period with a sharp increase to 175.