Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
In terms of householding, there are two popular options available for individuals. The first one is to live in
a
old-fashioned Change the article
an
house
, the latter one is to live in a high-rise modern Use synonyms
apartment
building. Personally, I would prefer to live in a single property with Use synonyms
own
garden rather than a twenty-storey high-tech Correct pronoun usage
my own
apartment
building. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss why isolation from other Linking Words
people
and their noise or being much more Use synonyms
comfortoble
is Correct your spelling
comfortable
Correct article usage
an inchangable
inchangable
option for me about householding.
As an Correct your spelling
unchangeable
changeable
introvert
person, Replace the word
introverted
seperation
from the neighbourhood is crucial. Some neighbours could be really Correct your spelling
separation
disturbing
with their actions or noisy during Replace the word
disturbed
a
day. Correct article usage
the
For example
, In an Linking Words
apartment
building some Use synonyms
people
put their Use synonyms
thrash
Correct your spelling
trash
can
Correct subject-verb agreement
cans
at
Change preposition
apply
the
outside of their houses beside the entering doors. From my point of view, it is not Correct article usage
apply
healty
to put your waste bin Correct your spelling
healthy
at
the common Change preposition
in
are
of the building. Correct your spelling
area
Moreover
, there are a lot of households with children that Linking Words
make
huge noise pollution during Verb problem
cause
a
day which could be annoying occasionally. Correct article usage
the
However
, living in a single Linking Words
house
is superior to Use synonyms
Wrong verb form
tackling
tackle
these obstacles. All noisy households will be separated from any Wrong verb form
tackling
kinds
of single Fix the agreement mistake
kind
house
easily. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in a single Linking Words
Use synonyms
house
Add a comma
house,
people
do not have to hear the noise pollution of their neighbours. Use synonyms
In addition
, owners can arrange their properties Linking Words
according to
their Linking Words
preferances
and can Correct your spelling
preferences
be avoided
to unfamiliar habits of other Wrong verb form
avoid
people
.
Comfort is the latter benefit of living in a Use synonyms
seperated
Correct your spelling
separate
separated
house
. It can help not only to reduce Use synonyms
your
stress, but it can Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
provide residents Linking Words
an
appropriate environment for Add the preposition
with an
hobbies
Use synonyms
such
as gardening or playing the guitar with a high-voltage combo amplifier. In high-rise Linking Words
building
these kinds of Replace the word
buildings
hobbies
would be impossible to maintain without any hesitation. But, Use synonyms
for instance
, Linking Words
people
can play their guitars with Use synonyms
a
high Correct article usage
apply
desibels
without Correct your spelling
decibels
decibel
concerning
about their neighbours. Replace the word
concern
Furthermore
, they do not have to do their gardening Linking Words
in
a small balcony. They might have their own gardens for their Change preposition
on
hobbies
in traditional houses. Eventually, Use synonyms
this
flexibility will bring joy to their lives and improve their mental health in Linking Words
a
long term.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the
to live
in a many-storey Change the verb form
living
apartment
building or a Use synonyms
separated
traditional Replace the word
separate
house
are available options for most residents. My personal Use synonyms
preferance
is Correct your spelling
preference
definetly
living in a traditional Correct your spelling
definitely
house
with a garden which has to be far away from neighbourhoods to continue my own Use synonyms
hobbies
. Eventually, Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
kinds of properties provide Correct determiner usage
these
people
to separate themselves from the community and their Use synonyms
miscalleneous
actions.Correct your spelling
miscellaneous
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