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to be that because of
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their traditional values but it will be better to live. I agree that
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will provide arguments to show why
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agree.
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want to say that it is really not hard to
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yourself in pursuit
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money
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lot of examples when
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was a very happy and
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kind person but
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humanity.
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someone for just
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.
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to
money
.
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of
people
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that they are better.
As we can see now, there are families that suffer from poorness and it is
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mentioned
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the dark side of
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in abundance.
In other words
, you need to work hard to receive enough
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or your
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comfortable life
To conclude
, it is nice to work hard and be rich but you should not
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your humanity in
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to receive
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money
. Namely, everybody
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their behaviour and work.