Informing an Airline. Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: •where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regard to finding the carry-on

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that I lost on my flight from New York to Paris on 12th September,

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I was on a

business

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trip. My seating arrangement assigned to me was 7D of the

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class segment on Flight number EY131. As far as my memory recalls, I placed my cabin

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somewhere in between rows 1 to 10 of the

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class. The

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was quite distinct from far

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it had a brown leather cover on the outside.

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, it has two compartments whose

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are concealed and driven by mere two unidirectional wheels.

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the

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is old

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a present from my parents when I embarked upon my journey to the USA for higher education and

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I can’t imagine losing that one. More importantly, the

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contains my work laptop

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the Identification card for the

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expo which I am travelling for.

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,

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is of utmost requirement for me to enter the premises and carry out the

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duty. I hope

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reputed airline like yours will take due diligence at the earliest in finding the

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for premium travellers and update me. Yours Faithfully, Harsh