The line graph gives information about the number of books that were borrowed in four various libraries in 2014, with the piechart illustratesthe proportion of different types of books over the four months.

The line graph gives information about the number of books that were borrowed in four various libraries in 2014, with the piechart illustratesthe proportion of different types of books over the four months.
The line graph gives information about the number of
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that were borrowed
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four various libraries in 2014, with the
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illustratesthe
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illustrates the
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proportion of different types of
books
over the four months. In general, we can see that in Sutton
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in September the indicator shows the best result over the period, and in
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the most read genre was fiction
books
. As can be seen in the line graph, the borrowing for Ryeslip
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down over the period, falling significantly from almost 300
books
to just under 200
books
in September.
By contrast
, in Sutton Wood over the first two months borrowing declined dramatically, but in September climbed sharply. In other
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borrowing
rose gradually over the period. As is presented in the pie chart,
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fiction
books
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close to one half,
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the average for all types is about 15 per cent,
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10 per cent
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books
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borrowed
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