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The line graph gives information about the number of
books
that were borrowed in
four various libraries in 2014, with the Change preposition
from
piechart
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pie chart
illustratesthe
proportion of different types of Correct your spelling
illustrates the
illustrates
books
over the four months.
In general, we can see that in Sutton wood
in September the indicator shows the best result over the period, and in Capitalize word
Wood
pie
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the pie
chart
the most read genre was fiction Add a comma
chart,
books
.
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books
to just under 200 books
in September. By contrast
, in Sutton Wood over the first two months borrowing declined dramatically, but in September climbed sharply. In other libraries
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libraries,
borrowng
rose gradually over the period.
As is presented in the pie chart, Correct your spelling
borrowing
the
fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
borrowed
close to one half, Add a missing verb
were borrowed
meanwhile
the average for all types is about 15 per cent, Add a comma
meanwhile,
only
10 per cent Correct word choice
and only
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was
borrowed Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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months.Correct your spelling
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