The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart displays the number of fish
consumption
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and several various types of meat in Europe from 1979 to 2004. It is clearly seen that the quantity of people consuming chicken increases during the
period
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while
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the ones who consume beef, lamb and fish decreases. Broadly, it is readily noticeable that the
consumption
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of chicken experiences an upward trend
while
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the
consumption
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of meat reported a downward trend. In terms of chicken
consumption
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, it showed steady progress throughout the
period
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, starting at below 150
grams
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per week consumed by a person, it experienced a fluctuation between 1979 and 1984;
however
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, the
consumption
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recorded a steady rise until 1989.
Furthermore
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, the fluctuation trend again was shown from 1989 to early 1994 and 1994 to around 2000. It comprised 250
grams
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per week in 1999 and relatively decreased in recent years.
In contrast
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, beef and lamb
consumption
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had a commonality pattern in which those figures dipped deeply from the beginning of the
period
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to about 1980.
Nevertheless
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, there was a sudden growth in beef
consumption
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before 1984 compared to lamb
consumption
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had a slight decline. Both trends showed a fluctuation data until around 1988. After that,
consumption
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decreased steadily. Interestingly, fish
consumption
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relatively fell during the
period
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, ranging to above 50
grams
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per week in 1979 and reduced steadily to below 50
grams
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at the end
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of the
period
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, period, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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