A road near your home is damaged. Write a letter to the council of your town/city to complain about it. In your letter.

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Dear, Sir or Madam My name is Amirbek. I am from Bukhara, on the street

Mohi-xossa

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Mohi-fossa

. I was born here. Our road used to be good. And now she is in an obvious state. It has been in

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condition for almost half a year now. We complained several times. But they are still slippery. Because of

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, the tires and wheels of our cars deteriorate. And in winter it

very

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dangerous for people, they may not see

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hole under the snow and an accident may occur. And we want our road to be repaired as it was before. And we will be grateful if you accept our request!

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

110 words

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A road near your home is damaged. Write a letter to the council of your town/city to complain about it. In your letter.

The Closing

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Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, businesses and the academy world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.