Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make work calls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?
In
this
day and age, with the development of smart
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smartphones
phones
to make human's
life more convenient and easier, there are Change noun form
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also
have
some drawbacks. From my personal perspective, Unnecessary verb
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belive
that the disadvantages are insufficient to outweigh the advantages, and Correct your spelling
believe
this
essay shall elaborate on the rationale.
On the one hand, excessive use of mobile phones
can affect human's
health. Change noun form
human
For example
, a large number of teenagers are addicted to surfing social networking sites, such
as Facebook, TikTok, and Instagram on their smartphones. Because of the fact that the contents of these apps are designed catch
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to catch
human
eye and Add an article
the human
addictive
, so young Add a missing verb
are addictive
people
tend to stare at the small digital screen in
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for
along
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a long
period
. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
Consequently
, this
could have a bad effect on human's
eyesight and Change noun form
human
their
sleep quality, which worsen work and study performance. Another disadvantage is that the trend of using smart devices is reducing the relationships among Correct pronoun usage
apply
peoples
. For the reason that it is convenient for Fix the agreement mistake
people
people
to text message
and send Fix the agreement mistake
messages
email
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emails
instead
of going outside and having face-to-face interactions with other people
. As a result
, the lack of important social skills, such
as communication and teamwork skills which
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apply
make
it difficult for them to land a job and expand social relationships. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Therefore
the quality of potential
workforce of a nation could Correct article usage
the potential
be
decrease.
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On the other hand
, using a mobile phone can enable people
to keep in touch with others in a
more easier and convenient way. Correct article usage
an
For example
, during Covid-19
pandemic, citizens were not allowed to leave their Correct article usage
the Covid-19
home
, but they were still able to communicate with relatives and friends. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
As a result
, this
has eased people
's loneliness and depression. In addition
, personal mobile phones
has
become life-saving equipment for unexpected emergency situations. When there is a horrific traffic accident, Change the verb form
have
people
can immediately make a phone call to the police, rescue team and ambulance which can increase the survival chance for victims.Consequently
, the development of mobile devices contribute
to improving Change the verb form
contributes
safety
and convenience of society.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the safety
while
there are some disadvantages of mobile phones
could
affect human life, Correct pronoun usage
that could
but
we cannot ignore the positive aspect of Correct word choice
apply
this
device to Correct determiner usage
these
human kind
. The advantages of Correct your spelling
humankind
enable
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enabling
people
to keep in touch with others more easier
and convenient Replace the word
easily
is
seem to outweigh the Unnecessary verb
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drawback
.Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
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