In some countries there more young people choosing in enroll in work based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years selected countries
youthful
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young
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people
wants
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have wanted
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to earn more money because nowadays, most of them
are
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apply
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like to live
luxury
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luxurious
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life
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lives
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.
Therefore
, folk
does
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do
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not like to study so
long
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a long
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period without employment. As
result
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a result
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, most of the
nation
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nation's
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young generation has
select
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selected
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vocational training without
attend
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attending
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the
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apply
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university
.
However
, I would say
on
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apply
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the training
having
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has
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advantages
and
disadvantages
.
Nevertheless
,
my
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in my
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point of view,
take
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taking
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in to
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into
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account
this
situation
have
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has
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advantages
than
disadvantages
.
This
essay will discuss both views and provide reasons with examples
forthcoming
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in forthcoming
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paragraphs.
To begin
, nowadays,
some
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in some
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states young generation join
to
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apply
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the vocational training program
therefore
they will
easy to
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easily
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success
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succeed
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there
job
life. If they
joined
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join
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vocational training,
program
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the program
a program
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able
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is able
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to get more
experiences
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experience
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.
Specially
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,
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in today
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today
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today's
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world some countries opened several vacancies for
skill
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skilled
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workers.
Likewise
who
is
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apply
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attend to the on
the
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apply
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job
training
they
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apply
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might
be joined
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join
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the
job
very
easy
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easily
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.
For Instance
: Currently have been open lots of vocational training
institute
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institutes
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in Sri
lanka
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Lanka
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. These places conducted several
on the
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on-the-job
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job
training
programed
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programs
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.
Past
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era had
number
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a number
the number
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of
institute
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institutes
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nevertheless
no one
attends
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attended
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to
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apply
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that project, everyone
try
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tried
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attempt to
university
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a university
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scheme.
However
, these days all of them are going to attend
the
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apply
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vocational training programs
due
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apply
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to, have a
chanced
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chance
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immediately
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to immediately
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joined
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join
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for employment.
This
is
big
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a big
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advantages
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advantage
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for young society and their mother
country
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country's
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economy. Because of that,
previously
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apply
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I
mention
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mentioned
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at
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apply
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this
time many of counties youth crowd like to
joined
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join
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vocational training programs in spite of attending
university
. On the one hand, I take into account, having
disadvantages
this
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of this
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situation.
Due to
,
number
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the number
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of countries young generation
join on
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joined
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the
job
scheme they are unable to
success
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succeed
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there education
qualification
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qualifications
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.
As a result
, when they want to get
promotion
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a promotion
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their
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in their
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career,
company
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the company
a company
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could not
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cannot
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give a chance for them. A reason is that
,
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apply
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when they want to promote someone they consider education
qualification
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qualifications
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.
For Instance
,
This
is my experience, when I worked as
a
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an
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HR, and Administration officer,
company
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the company
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wants
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wanted
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to give
promotion
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promotions
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for
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to
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me and other staff members. Who was
working
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working for
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our
company
more
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for more
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than 10 years
.
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?
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Nevertheless
, at that time
company
approved only me, unfortunately
company
not
approved
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approve
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other staff
member
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members
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. The reason he
have
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has
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not education qualification.
Finally
, I would say not only my country
all
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but all
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over the world facing
above
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the above
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problem
uneducated
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of uneducated
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people.
To conclude
, when discussing both points of view,
advantages
and
disadvantages
have lots of positive and negative erectness.
by
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the way
who is
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,
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choosing work
base
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basic
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training scheme
have
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is
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more profitable
to
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for
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people and their country in spite of attending
university
.
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