In some countries there more young people choosing in enroll in work based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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youthful

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young

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people

wants

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have wanted

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to earn more money because nowadays, most of them

are

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like to live

luxury

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life

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lives

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, folk

does

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not like to study so

long

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period without employment. As

result

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a result

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, most of the

nation

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nation's

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young generation has

select

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selected

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vocational training without

attend

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attending

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the

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apply

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university

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.

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, I would say

on

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apply

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the training

having

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has

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advantages

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and

disadvantages

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.

Nevertheless

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,

my

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in my

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point of view,

take

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taking

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in to

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into

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account

this

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situation

have

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has

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advantages

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than

disadvantages

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essay will discuss both views and provide reasons with examples

forthcoming

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in forthcoming

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paragraphs.

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, nowadays,

some

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in some

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states young generation join

to

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apply

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the vocational training program

therefore

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they will

easy to

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easily

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success

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succeed

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there

job

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life. If they

joined

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join

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vocational training,

program

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the program

a program

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able

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is able

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to get more

experiences

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experience

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Specially

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,

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in today

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today

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today's

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world some countries opened several vacancies for

skill

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skilled

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workers.

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who

is

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apply

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attend to the on

the

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apply

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job

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training

they

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apply

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might

be joined

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join

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the

job

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very

easy

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easily

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: Currently have been open lots of vocational training

institute

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in Sri

lanka

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. These places conducted several

on the

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on-the-job

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job

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training

programed

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programs

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Past

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era had

number

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a number

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of

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institutes

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nevertheless

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no one

attends

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attended

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to

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apply

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that project, everyone

try

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tried

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attempt to

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university

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a university

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scheme.

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, these days all of them are going to attend

the

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apply

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vocational training programs

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due

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apply

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to, have a

chanced

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chance

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immediately

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to immediately

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joined

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join

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for employment.

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is

big

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a big

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advantages

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advantage

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for young society and their mother

country

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country's

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economy. Because of that,

previously

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apply

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I

mention

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mentioned

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at

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apply

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this

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time many of counties youth crowd like to

joined

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join

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vocational training programs in spite of attending

university

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. On the one hand, I take into account, having

disadvantages

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this

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of this

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situation.

Due to

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,

number

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the number

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of countries young generation

join on

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joined

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the

job

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scheme they are unable to

success

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succeed

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there education

qualification

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qualifications

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.

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, when they want to get

promotion

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a promotion

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their

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in their

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career,

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company

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the company

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could not

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cannot

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give a chance for them. A reason is that

,

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apply

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when they want to promote someone they consider education

qualification

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qualifications

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For Instance

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,

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is my experience, when I worked as

a

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HR, and Administration officer,

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company

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the company

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wants

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wanted

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to give

promotion

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promotions

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for

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to

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me and other staff members. Who was

working

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working for

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our

company

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more

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for more

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than 10 years

.

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?

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, at that time

company

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approved only me, unfortunately

company

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not

approved

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approve

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other staff

member

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members

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. The reason he

have

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has

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not education qualification.

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, I would say not only my country

all

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but all

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over the world facing

above

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the above

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problem

uneducated

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of uneducated

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people.

To conclude

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, when discussing both points of view,

advantages

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and

disadvantages

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have lots of positive and negative erectness.

by

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the way

who is

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,

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choosing work

base

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basic

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training scheme

have

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is

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more profitable

to

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for

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people and their country in spite of attending

university

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