The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that using a
cell
phone and smoking are antisocial activities and as smoking is prohibited in specific areas the same should apply to
cell
phones. I strongly disagree with
this
belief as
cell
phones are necessary for daily activities and are not harmful to others and the environment.
First,
smoking is prohibited because of the damage that it produces to the lungs of a person.
In addition
, smoking is considered to be the first cause of death by lung cancer worldwide followed by chemical exposure to fumes and other hard fuels. As an example, a person who smokes has double the probability of dying than someone who does not smoke.
For
this
reason, countries have defined specific places free from smoke
such
as public transport, hospitals and other enclosed places that do not have an adequate ventilation system.
Secondly
,
cell
phones are necessary for everyday life. We use these devices for many purposes
such
as working, studying, communication, relaxing, enjoyment and many more. If we did not have
this
technology, a simple task
such
as writing an essay would take more time to complete.
For example
, thanks to bank apps we now have the ability to transfer and deposit money without actually leaving our home
thus
saving money and time. In conclusion, smoking is banned in certain places because of the damage that it causes to the ecosystem
while
cellular
phone
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are safe to use and do not have an effect on our health. These devices play an important part in our daily
life
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and should not be prohibited.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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