In the 21st century era, people have obviously better well-being than those who lived in
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ancient century,
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I
agree with
statement as
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everyone is able to access to necessary resources for living and having technology and innovation to be more convenient.
essay will
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the reasons to support my agreement.
The first
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that
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the present
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better than
in the past is accessibility to four requisites including
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, medicines, clothes, and houses. These days, individuals can easily find clean water to drink and use in daily
by just
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on water valves,
our ancestors need to walk more than 5
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to bring back clean water from rivers.
, the present citizens have more prolonged
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than in the past
the developed healthcare including modern hospitals, promising medicinal
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equipment
types of equipment
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or machines, vaccines, and medicines.
, now individuals less suffer from both famine and human diseases.
, the development of technology and innovation enables humans to live more
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and
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. With the advancement of technology, they can travel to the opposite side of the world within a day by
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, which
it Correct pronoun usage
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needs more than 6 months to travel with
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number of
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in the past.
, the internet
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us to
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messages to
who live
just less than a second for free,
it takes more than a month to
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letters to other countries.
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is easier than
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.
In conclusion,
the
reasons consisting of a
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in suffering and a
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. I totally agree that living in
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era is better than living in the previous era,
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our livelihood will be increasingly enhanced, if we come together.