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Write an email to counsellor of your area in about 150-200words . your email should mention about the march organised by your NGO and invite the counsellor to lead the march

Dear Sir, I am writing to invite you to lead a
march
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 organized by our NGO team on the
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 of "Earth Day" falls on the 30th of November. I would like to inform you that we have been celebrating Earth Day for the past 5 years and every year we have been inviting
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 guests to host the
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This
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 year We would request your presence to lead
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 event and make
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occasion
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a long-lasting memory for every one of us. On that day, we will be starting our
march
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 by hoisting
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 Earth Flag on the downtown road at 6AM and it is going to be a
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30-minute
march
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 on the road. We have obtained
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special permission from the traffic management to reroute the traffic during that specific time. After the
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, we will be planting trees in the local parks to celebrate the
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. I would request you to participate in the event and assist us in leading the
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. Thank you, Jeevitha

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