The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarize the table.
The table enumerates the total number of underprivileged
people
residing in Australia over the course of the year 1999.
Overall
, only 11% of residents were living in Australia, constituting about 1,837,000 population with low wages. These are categorized into six different groups, each with a varying poverty rate.
First,
we look at the people
with lower percentages dwelling in Australia in poor conditions. This
includes 4% of adult spouses, 6% of sole older ones, and 7% are married couples with no infants.
Conversely
, we will focus on higher percentages of people
staying in impoverished states. 12% includes couples bearing children, and they amount to 933,000 people
. Additionally
, 19% of childless unmarried households, and their total population is 359,000, endured poor conditions. Lastly
, 21% of sole parents with a total of 232,000 inhabitants struggled with economic issues, and they were deficient with prerequisite needs during the year 1999.Submitted by sh.mariakhan on
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