The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The illustration provides information on the process of how the
water
cycle occurs in natural and man-made areas.
Overall
, most of the water
found on clouds belongs to the ocean, as water
has different physical forms, it can be found in multiple natural phenomena.
First,
water
from the ocean evaporates under the heat of the sun, once it reaches a certain altitude it starts condensing and forming a cloud. Consequently
, once enough clouds have been formed, rain pours due to
precipitation constituting lakes and snow formation.
Then
, a process called surface runoff filters water
underground to the impervious layer. Finally
once it comes in contact with saltwater it comes back to the ocean, where Add a comma
Finally,
this
cycle will repeat once again.Submitted by f.leyton.a on
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