You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, give details of the ad that you want to publish mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you today to let you know that I have a small apartment in the city centre that I want to rent to a family.

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, I would like to publish an ad in your newspaper.

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, I want you to add pictures to the advertisement

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to the description I will send to you.

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, I would appreciate it if you keep it the way I send it without adding any adjustments. Clearly, publishing the ad on the front page is required.Especially, since a lot of people can see the ad even without buying the newspaper. Which makes it successful. In conclusion,I will be sending you a check by mail to pay for the expenses.

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, It is costly so I will be sending two checks. The first one will be sent now and you will receive the second next week. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully. Katty.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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7 paragraphs

154 words

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