write a referral letter to Ms susan williams,the hospital health worker, requesting her to see the patient before discharge
I am writing to refer Mr Yanlin who has undergone emergency cardiac surgery and requires your continued
care
and support.Now he is set to be discharged today.
Mr Yanlin was presented to our care
on 31 march
with chief complaints of severe chest and back pain. He has undergone several Capitalize word
March
investigation
and has performed Change to a plural noun
investigations
echocardiogram
was Correct article usage
an echocardiogram
reveal
Wrong verb form
revealed
that
aortic value incompetence for which he has undergone open chest surgery with mechanical value.During Correct word choice
apply
post operatively
, he made Add a hyphen
post-operatively
a
good progress and his blood was stabilized gradually.He was started with Remove the article
apply
exercise
program by Correct article usage
an exercise
physiotherapist
.Currently,he Add an article
a physiotherapist
the physiotherapist
was
started on warfarin therapy.
Mr Yanlin is a student and lives alone in Australia.His mother has Wrong verb form
has been
came
to Australia from Change the verb form
come
china
Capitalize word
China
for taking
Change preposition
to take
care
him
.He has had a Change preposition
of him
habbit
of smoking and has Correct your spelling
habit
high
BP since 2010. He has a family history of heart Add a missing verb
had high
problem
.
I would highly appreciate it, if you could assist him before discharge because Fix the agreement mistake
problems
of
his lease on rental accommodation has recently expired.Kindly educate him Change preposition
apply
regardind
the warfarin therapy. Provide him Correct your spelling
regarding
proper
wound Change preposition
with proper
care
and monitor his BP to be maintained at 120/80 . In addition
, help him regarding
his weight Change preposition
with
losing
and stop smoking.
Yours sincerely
NurseReplace the word
loss
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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