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The charts give information about timber and world forest abundance in five different regions.

The charts give information about timber and world forest abundance in five different regions.
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Both pie charts compare data about the proportion of
timber
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 and
world
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forest
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 in
Northen
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North
America
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, South
America
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,
Africa
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,
Asia
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 and Europe.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Northern
America
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 had the highest percentage in both sides.
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,
Africa
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 contains the lowest in
timber
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 and
Asia
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 contains the least in
world
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forest
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. With 25% and 27%, respectively, of the global
forest
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 cover, North
America
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 and
Africa
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 together account for more than half of all forests. With 18%, 16%, and 14% of the
world
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's
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forest
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forests
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, respectively, Europe, South
America
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, and
Asia
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 all have comparable amounts. Nearly one-third of the
world
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's
timber
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 supply comes from North American forests (30%),
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 almost one-quarter comes from South American forests (23%).
Africa
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 accounts for a sizable chunk of the
world
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's
forest
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,
although
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 just 9% of the
world
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's
timber
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 is found there.
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 20% and 18%, respectively, of the
world
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's supply of
timber
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 come from Europe and
Asia
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, world, forest, america, africa, asia with synonyms.
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