An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alterntive arrangements.

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Dear Sumesh, I am so glad that after a gap of five years

finally

, you are coming to my city New Delhi. I can't express to you how excited I am to meet you! But there is a small hiccup, as decided earlier I won't be able to pick you up from the airport. My boss suddenly decided to visit the office and arranged a conference which will

last

for six hours for two consecutive days.

Along with

this

, my paternal uncle with his family came to stay at our residence on the same days. Owing to the above reasons, I won't find myself available for you. But that's only for two days. After that, I am free for you and will be there for you till your stay.

Furthermore

instead

of me, my friend Avinashi will come to pick you up from the airport and I have made all the arrangements for your stay at his villa. I know you will understand my situation . I promise that your stay in New Delhi will be a memorable one. Best wishes for your trip to New Delhi. Yours Truly, Gurleen

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

190 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alterntive arrangements.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people believe it's better to learn something new in a group than individually? Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that a visitor to country should follow local custom and tradition while other believe that host country should respect the cultural differences. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?