Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, whether our

food

is healthy or not is

critical

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issue not only for ourselves but

also

governments which have to keep people's health. Because certain foods include a great amount of

sugar

, some people have discussed if sugary

products

have to be made more expensive. Admitting that there are always pros and cons to

this

idea, depending on the value systems or circumstances, the answer varies. All in all, I partly agree with

this

idea. First and foremost, the motivation to make its

food

include more

sugar

must be discouraged

due to

this

policy. In order to gain popularity with

food

, enterprises have a lot of alternatives but every option's expenditure is not the same, which means that adding much

sugar

is the cheapest and easiest method.

However

, once the sugary

products

' cost becomes higher, the balance of demand and supply with sugary

products

must be altered, which makes those

products

less popular.

As a result

, each firm starts to

take

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effort

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not to focus on the quantity of

sugar

but to choose the other options to gain popularity.

Secondly

but not less important, we have to recognize that certain types of country's citizens heavily rely on sugary

products

, which means

this

measure discussed in

this

essay becomes essential for those citizens’ subsistence but

this

becomes in vain for others. Like Japanese, too much

sugar

in

food

is thought to be low quality or unsophisticated.

However

,

American's

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taste isn't

same

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as Japanese.

This

means the demand for sugary

products

in the United States must be higher than

Japan

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in Japan

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, and thereby

this

methodology must be more critical to those people’s expenditures and discourage them from buying those

products

. In conclusion, to make sugary

products

more expensive is important for enterprises to have high regard for

sugar

because

sugar

is the simplest method to gain popularity, and

also

causes damage to only certain types of people to regard

sugar

as essential with regard to their expense.

Therefore

, I partly agree with

this

idea.