The graph shows the quantities of goods transported ini the uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph shows the quantities of goods transported ini the uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
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4 means of transport to deliver
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in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
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, it can be seen that there was an increase in the amount of
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transported by
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, water and pipeline,
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rail remained unchanged.
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, despite a slight drop,
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was the most used mode for the whole period. Regarding the 3 methods with climbing uses,
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and pipeline transported about 70 and 5 million
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in 1974, respectively. As for
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, its figure fluctuated at about 75 million
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for the next 2 decades before rising to nearly 100
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by 2002.
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, roughly 25
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of
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delivered
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pipeline
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by 1982 which
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off until 1990,
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it had a small decrease of approximately 5
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before remaining stable again for the rest of the period. In terms of water methods, the amount of
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transported witnessed an upward trend from under 40
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to over 60
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. Looking at the remaining mode of rail, even though there
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many changes in its figure, it still remained the same
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40
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throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, road, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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