The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the future changes in the industrial area, and the proposed plan
rebuild
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to rebuild
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this
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site.
Overall
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, as can be seen, the housing site will instand of all factory
zone
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zones
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, supporting the living and several facilities. Right now area, there are many factories dispersed around
roundboate
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Roundboate
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and on either side of the eastern street, and on the opposite side of the factory the farmland is located on the north side and straight down the
reiver
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river
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.
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, the factories will demolished and replaced by housing and other buildings. In the future, the farmland will be developed as a residential site and will be built
the
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apply
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bridge across the river and connect the roundabout. The new will be paved new road and built new houses
in
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there, shops and a medical centre will be built in the roundabout of the bottle. The original eastern road will be a playground in the
middle-top
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middle top
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and a school at its edge
as well as
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other
accommodation
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accommodations
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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