The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The

pictures'

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pictures

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diagram illustrates how to produce

sugar

from

sugar

canes

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cane

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.

Overall

, there are 7 steps which are separated from

farmer's

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the farmer's

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process until harvesting and

factory's

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the factory's

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procedure from crushing

sugar

canes

to drying and cooling

moisten

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moistened

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sugar

. In the farmer's process, it takes twelve months to eighteen months to grow

sugar

canes

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cane

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, which is followed by harvesting

that is

operated by people or machines. In the case of people’s operation, they have to cut the lower parts of

sugar

canes

by knife, whilst in the latter case, unnecessary parts

of

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apply

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them

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apply

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are automatically removed from an attached container after cutting the same point. In the next part, cut

sugar

canes

are squeezed to extract juicy liquid by rollers. After that,

this

juicy liquid is purified by a limestone filter. To make

syrup

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a syrup

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of

sugar

, purified juice is evaporated in a hot pot by adding heat using

fire

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a fire

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. In order to acquire

sugar

crystals from

this

syrup,

centrifugal

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a centrifugal

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machine is needed to extract

solid

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a solid

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part of

syrup

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the syrup

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. By drying and cooling that solid

sugar

with moisture, refined

sugar

is completed.