You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the problem. • explain what happened when you asked the hotel staff for help. • say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Mr Walia,
I am
one
of your customers who recently stayed at your hotel in Shimla for one
night. I am writing this
letter to inform you that despite booking one
of the best hotels in the area and paying a premium amount, I was not able to enjoy my stay at your property due to the improper functioning of the centralised heating system.
When I complained about it to the hotel staff, they said they are fixing the issue and it will be resolved in an hour. However
, I had to spend the whole night in cold weather as the system was not fixed till morning. I also
asked them to upgrade the room in case it was a problem with one
specific suite but they denied the same as well.
I really got dissatisfied with the services of your resort. I feel like my money is a waste as I didn't get the comfort I wanted. Therefore
, I request you please refund a portion of my payment or provide me with any discounted voucher for future use. Also
, I would recommend not accepting bookings if the facilities are not available or are under repair otherwise
, guests will give low ratings to your resort.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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