The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
The graphs presented here contrast the percentage of French with the one of Indians
according to
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sex and age in 1984.
Overall
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, we can observe that the population in India, especially among young people, was very large. But the number of inhabitants in India decreases considerably when they get old.
By contrast
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, in France the figures for inhabitants were less important,
however
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, they lived longer.
First,
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in the Asian country, the young population of males and females is larger than in France. As we can see, in the first picture, between 0 and 15, the bracket is about 3 and 4.
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in the other chart, in the same period, the proportion is between 6 and 7. After that, it evens out because in the two diagrams we can distinguish that at 40 and 45 cohorts, the bracket is 3.
Nevertheless
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, the French lived longer than the Indians. After 45, the rate of Iatter fell a lot. It began at 3 % and it dropped to 1% at 70. It is the same case for inhabitants of the European country but the population has dropped less. It began with
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3% but it dropped to only 2%.
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, we have data for 85 for French and we don’t have more brackets after 70 for Indians.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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