You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram shows the process involved in the production of energy from coal. First of all, the coal is delivered by lorry. After that, it is carried along a conveyor belt to the power plant, where it is burned in a large furnace to which oxygen is added. From
this
, raw syngas is produced. At the next stage of the process, harmful substances like carbon dioxide, mercury and sulfur are removed. Following that, purified gas is used to drive a gas
turbine
. The
turbine
in turn powers a generator, producing electricity. The gas
turbine
also
produces hot exhaust gases. These are
then
piped to a heat recovery
steam
generator, which converts the heat into
steam
. The
steam
is
subsequently
used to power a
steam
turbine
, which again is used to generate electricity.
It is clear that
the production of energy from coal requires a series of stages, including the use of exhaust gases.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turbine, steam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • combustion
  • thermal energy
  • boil
  • turbines
  • mechanical energy
  • generator
  • electrical energy
  • transmitted
  • power lines
  • furnace
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