write a discharge letter to the nursing unit manager .the rehabilitation centre
I am writing to request rehabilitation care for
Mrs berly
who was admitted to our care on 4 February with Correct your spelling
Mrs. Berly
fractured
left neck of femur Correct article usage
a fractured
due to
fall
and has undergone left hemiarthroplasty. Now he is set to be discharged into your care.
Correct article usage
a fall
Post operatively
, his physical activity started with assistance on day 2 of hospitalization and initiated an exercise program Correct your spelling
Postoperatively
to
Change preposition
for
strength
and Replace the word
strengthening
recovery
. During hospitalization, Replace the word
recover
anti-embolic
stocking was placed for 14 days. At present, she can ambulate short Correct article usage
an anti-embolic
distance
with assistance.She requires ADL with full assistance.
Mrs Berly is Fix the agreement mistake
distances
a
widowed and lives alone in her house. She has had a history of hypertension and is on medication.I would Change the article
apply
highy
appreciate itCorrect your spelling
highly
,
if you could take over the management of the patient. Please ensure compliance with the prescribed medication regime. kindly monitor her blood pressure during therapy for 3\7 Remove the comma
apply
due to
adjustment in antihypertensive medicines. Additinally
, kindly assess her need Correct your spelling
Additionally
of
rehabilitation therapy during inpatient and after Change preposition
for
return her
home.
if you have any queries ,don't hesitate to contact me.
yours sincerely
NurseWrong verb form
returning
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite