The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in different years

The provided two charts illustrate the information on how it affected the people who were using it, They represents six kinds of devices

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mobile phone, laptops, tablets, desktop computers, and flat-screen or conventional TVs that were used in 2009 and 2019

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, the number of people who have been was exactly the three that may

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the highest per

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was Mobile hone, and Desktop Computer. As can be seen, during 2009, the highest number of conventional TVs rose up to 34

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compared to 2019

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when most of the population used fewer, which was approximately 4 per

cent

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their convenience. Followed by a Smartphone

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exactly 15 per

cent

which has risen to 26 per

cent

during the recent year.

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comparing

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with

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Tablets, or Flat screen

TV

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TVs

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was lower than 10 per

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during the past years, compared to the other three devices

such

as Desktop computers

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a maximum percentage of 12 to 18 . The results of the frequently used devices that have the most were exactly the number of smartphones that were owned and used during recent years.