Aircraft's have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries, where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The world in
21st
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century has
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high rate of global trading, not only
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electronic gadgets and garments but
also
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foods
. Nowadays, the most
common
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used
transportations
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transportation
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methods are either ships or flights.
However
, some experts think that
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using flights for transportation
doesn’t
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really
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worthy it
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worthy
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, especially in
case
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the case
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of
fruits
and
vegetables
.
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,
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others say
airway
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the airway
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is
must
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a must
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to protect food quality and freshness. Every part of
world
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are
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not cultivating every type of
fruits
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fruit
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and
vegetables
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vegetable
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,
for instance
,
the
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desert areas like
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the middle
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middle east
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Middle East
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, cannot grow all kinds of
vegetables
because of the soil type and availability of water. These kinds of countries are completely
depended
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on importing
vegetables
from other countries. On
other
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the other
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side of the world, some countries are
over flooded
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over-flooded
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with seasonal
vegetables
, even regular
vegetables
.
Due to
lack
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a lack
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of storage measures,
the
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foods
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food
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wastage reached
high
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a high
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rate. Only exporting will reduce the food waste in
such
case
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cases
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. If perishable
foods
are
sailed
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sold
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, preservation methods
such
as
addition
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the addition
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of chemical preservatives may be used to store
foods
longer.
Although
, air freight will add more costs to products
but
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it is considered when transporting perishable
foods
to preserve
the
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freshness without
addition
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the addition
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of any preservatives. Anyhow, airfreight is unnecessary and expensive, when transporting
non perishable
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non-perishable
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foods
,
such
as apples and other
long shelf
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long-shelf
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life
fruits
.
Also
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the
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global trading can mobilize the growth rate of
country
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countries
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and agricultural practices
,
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when they are completely
depended
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dependent
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on importing
foods
. In
such
cases
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cases,
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agriculture techniques and developing new crops are likely to fade away. In conclusion, I am convinced
advantages
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the advantages
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overweigh
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outweigh
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disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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. Air freight might add more cost; consumers are likely to get
fruits
and
vegetables
without preservatives, as everyone
know
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,
over consuming
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overconsuming
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of
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chemical
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chemicals
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will have
adverse
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an adverse
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effect
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effects
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on health.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transportation
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Hardly grow
  • Out of season
  • Advantages
  • Access
  • Variety
  • Demand
  • Reliance
  • Local production
  • Disadvantages
  • Carbon emissions
  • Climate change
  • Expensive
  • Traditional farming practices
  • Opinion
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