Aircraft's have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries, where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world in
21st
century has Correct article usage
the 21st
marked
high rate of global trading, not only Correct article usage
a marked
the
electronic gadgets and garments but Correct article usage
apply
also
the
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apply
foods
. Nowadays, the most common
used Change the word
commonly
transportations
methods are either ships or flights. Change the noun form
transportation
However
, some experts think that,
using flights for transportation Remove the comma
apply
doesn’t
really Verb problem
isn’t
Correct pronoun usage
worthy it
worthy
, especially in Replace the word
worth
case
of Correct article usage
the case
fruits
and vegetables
. While
,
others say Remove the comma
apply
airway
is Correct article usage
the airway
must
to protect food quality and freshness.
Every part of Correct article usage
a must
world
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the world
are
not cultivating every type of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
fruits
and Fix the agreement mistake
fruit
vegetables
, Fix the agreement mistake
vegetable
for instance
, the
desert areas like Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
the middle
middle east
, cannot grow all kinds of Correct your spelling
Middle East
vegetables
because of the soil type and availability of water. These kinds of countries are completely depended
on importing Replace the word
dependent
vegetables
from other countries.
On other
side of the world, some countries are Correct article usage
the other
over flooded
with seasonal Add a hyphen
over-flooded
vegetables
, even regular vegetables
. Due to
lack
of storage measures, Correct article usage
a lack
the
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apply
foods
wastage reached Change the noun form
food
high
rate. Only exporting will reduce the food waste in Correct article usage
a high
such
case
. If perishable Fix the agreement mistake
cases
foods
are sailed
, preservation methods Verb problem
sold
such
as addition
of chemical preservatives may be used to store Add an article
the addition
foods
longer. Although
, air freight will add more costs to products but
it is considered when transporting perishable Remove the conjunction
apply
foods
to preserve the
freshness without Change the word
their
addition
of any preservatives.
Anyhow, airfreight is unnecessary and expensive, when transporting Add an article
the addition
non perishable
Add a hyphen
non-perishable
foods
, such
as apples and other long shelf
life Add a hyphen
long-shelf
fruits
. Also
Add a comma
Also,
the
global trading can mobilize the growth rate of Correct article usage
apply
country
and agricultural practicesFix the agreement mistake
countries
,
when they are completely Remove the comma
apply
depended
on importing Replace the word
dependent
foods
. In such
cases
agriculture techniques and developing new crops are likely to fade away.
In conclusion, I am convinced Add a comma
cases,
advantages
Correct article usage
the advantages
overweigh
Verb problem
outweigh
disadvantages
. Air freight might add more cost; consumers are likely to get Correct article usage
the disadvantages
fruits
and vegetables
without preservatives, as everyone know
, Change the verb form
knows
over consuming
Correct your spelling
overconsuming
of
Change preposition
apply
chemical
will have Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
adverse
Add an article
an adverse
effect
on health.Fix the agreement mistake
effects
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