Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there has been a big debate about the freedom of the artists. Some opine that the government should not

interfair

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interfere

with their work

while

others are opposed to it.

Nevertheless

, I agree with

this

statement

upto

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up to

some extent

due to

particular reasons namely it might hurt

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beliefs and the following paragraphs will expatiate with lucid examples.

To begin

with, on the one side,

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few folks believe that there should be no pressure in their environment because it may

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their productivity. To explain

further

, it is hard for them to perform their

cerative

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creative

art under pressure

such

as stress. 20% of artistic people,

for example

, left their work owing to the government restrictions related to space, and ideas, in Pakistan.

Secondly

, their job is not only beneficial for fun but

also

for

the

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economic purposes namely, museums, and galleries. To illustrate, the majority of people are visiting these places which inclined financial status of the nation.

In addition

,

the

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scientist

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and engineers are taking ideas from their

job

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, namely an aeroplane

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after the painting of Palao and his partner. On the other side, the certain crowd thought that there should be some restrictions by high authorities.

Firstly

, if there

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no rules related to their talent, they can hurt someone's

feeling

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related to culture, and cast. As an illustration, Shubh, a famous painter shared his view related to his culture on his social media which

creates

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an

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anger emotion as

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predict

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it wrong.

Secondly

, the

governmnet

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government

should

banned

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the ideas which target someone's beliefs related to

religions

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. Take an example, in India, a painter

express

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his view in which he shows that his God is on the top and others are taking advice from him and it makes human beings angry

as well as

upset.

Hence

, the government should make a few rules and regulations to show their art.

To conclude

, it is

debatable

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topic that the authorities should give

fully

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freedom to artists or not. A few believe that

their

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should not

have

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any rules as it can

effect

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their productivity,

in addition

, it is beneficial to

boosts

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the economy of the states

while

others

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that they should focus on someone's beliefs related to religion and culture.

However

, I partially agree with the uppermost notion because art does not mean to target any community, cast

and

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religion.

Thus

, the

goverment

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government

comes with some laws.