Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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many

countries

are facing an economic downturn, so it is better for each

country

to focus on its own issues rather than helping other

countries

. If questioned, I disagree with

this

statement to a large extent. My preference is explained in the upcoming

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. The foremost reason for disagreeing with the given statement is that, when all the

countries

are facing

econimical ciris

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economic crisis

, the main idea should be on how

whole

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world could team up and face the world problem, which would be easier. If

countries

could work like a team

then

the

economical

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crisis would end for

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world and everyone would

be benefited

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. Adding more points, another reason for why

countries

should help each other are, if we would deny

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eachother

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each other

, which would cause partial growth, resulting in

growth

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of

few

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countries

only

while

other would lag in growth and development, and they would be set back, public of that

country

may have to suffer.

However

, some people would think of developing owns

country

first,

since that would be beneficial for the public of that

country

, they would get comfort

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and would live

stress free

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. Another important reason

maybe

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of getting

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respect at

international

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level, corresponding to foreign investors. Concluding, it can be said that both the ideas are right to execute, but only being

self oriented

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would be kind of selfish, so there should be a balance of both

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aspects and, along own's

country

other's

countries

should

also

grow.