You have bought an electronic equipment and within two days problem started occurring. Write a letter to the shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product & services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem .
Dear Manager,
I am Vikram Kallem, resides near to your Electronic store.I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with your products
and service .
One of my friend
is a happy customer of your Change to a plural noun
friends
products
and services.He recommended to purchase
the Electronic Change the verb form
purchasing
products
from your store. I bought 6 BDLC Fans.The Fans
appearance is Change noun form
Fan's
Fans'
very
astonishing.After installation they seemed to be working fine but, from the second Rephrase
apply
day
they started making annoying sounds.Add a comma
day,
Apperantley
, the regulator stopped working.
I raised the complaint earlier Correct your spelling
Apparently
this
week .The Technician tried to fix the problelm
but , he failed to do and mentioned that they Correct your spelling
problem
are
damaged Wrong verb form
were
products
and adviced
me to contact Correct your spelling
advised
replacement
Team .I emailed to designated department but heard no response from them.
I would like you to either provide me Correct article usage
the replacement
the
proper solution by Add the preposition
with the
end
of Correct article usage
the end
this
week or I have to file the case against you in the Consumer court.
I will be waiting to
your response.
With regards,
VikramChange preposition
for
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite