You have bought an electronic equipment and within two days problem started occurring. Write a letter to the shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product & services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem .

Dear Manager, I am Vikram Kallem, resides near to your Electronic store.I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with your
products
and service . One of my
friend
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is a happy customer of your
products
and services.He recommended
to purchase
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the Electronic
products
from your store. I bought 6 BDLC Fans.The
Fans
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appearance is
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astonishing.After installation they seemed to be working fine but, from the second
day
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they started making annoying sounds.
Apperantley
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Apparently
, the regulator stopped working. I raised the complaint earlier
this
week .The Technician tried to fix the
problelm
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problem
but , he failed to do and mentioned that they
are
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damaged
products
and
adviced
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me to contact
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Team .I emailed to designated department but heard no response from them. I would like you to either provide me
the
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proper solution by
end
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of
this
week or I have to file the case against you in the Consumer court. I will be waiting
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your response. With regards, Vikram
Submitted by vicky.kallem on

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  • therefore
  • however
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