The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
amount
of Carbon dioxide gas that every person Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
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it
in the 4 different countries which are Correct pronoun usage
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the United
United
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the United
Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, Italy and Portugal show increase
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an increase
while
Sweden
appeared increase
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to increase
then
decrease
with United
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the United
Kingdom
.
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TONNES UNITES WAS about from 4 to 6 and 1.75 to 2 respectively . Change preposition
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Italy shows steady
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a steady
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contrast with Portugal it shows Change preposition
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noticeable
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a noticeable
increase
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slight
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a slight
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a steady
increase
the last
carbon dioxide amount
in 2007 was about 5.5 tonnes for Portugal and around 8 tonnes for Italy .
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United
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the United
Kingdom
and Sweden
, firstly
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the United
Kingdom
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started
decrease
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a decrease
amount
was around 10,8 and the amount
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decreased
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about 9 in 2007 . In the Change preposition
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the
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showed
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