The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
amount
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of Carbon dioxide gas that every person
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produces
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produce
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produces
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apply
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it
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apply
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in the 4 different countries which are
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the United
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United
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the United
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Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007.
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, Italy and Portugal show
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increase
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an increase
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during all years
while
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Sweden
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appeared
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increase
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to increase
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then
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decrease
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with
United
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the United
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Kingdom
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. Looking in more detail , Italy and Portugal emerged surge between 1967 and 1977 the
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in
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of
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TONNES UNITES WAS about from 4 to 6 and 1.75 to 2 respectively .
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Italy shows
steady
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a steady
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increase
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as
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in
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contrast with Portugal it shows
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a noticeable
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increase
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from around 2 to 4 in 1987 .
the
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apply
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both countries show
slight
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a slight
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gradual after that show
steady
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a steady
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increase
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the
last
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carbon dioxide
amount
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in 2007 was about 5.5 tonnes for Portugal and around 8 tonnes for Italy . Looking
in to
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United
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the United
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Kingdom
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and
Sweden
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,
firstly
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United
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the United
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Kingdom
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starting
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started
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with
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decrease
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a decrease
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in 1967 the
amount
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was around 10,8 and the
amount
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still
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decrease
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decreased
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all years until arrived
to
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at
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about 9 in 2007 . In the
begging
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beginning
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when
Uk was
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the UK
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decreased
the
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apply
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Sweden
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shows
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showed
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a rocketed
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rocketed
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rocket
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increase
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from around 8. 3 to 10.3
then
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the average
amount
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stayed
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apply
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decrease
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decreased
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in all
years
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the years
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until arrived
to
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at
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the same
amount
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of
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as
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Portugal which
is
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was
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around 5.5 .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, kingdom, sweden, increase, decrease with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per capita emissions
  • fluctuate
  • decline
  • rise
  • trend
  • peak
  • notable
  • dramatic increase
  • steady decrease
  • comparatively
  • significant
  • marginal
  • consistently
  • plateau
  • surge
  • diminish
  • aggregate data
  • historical data
  • metric tons
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