Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

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Availability of similar goods in all
markjets
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markets
is resulting in
similarity
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the similarity
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of nations around the globe.
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,
this
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phenomenon could be seen as a beneficial development,
I
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completely disagree with
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viewpoint.
Perevalance
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of
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the same
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products anywhere in the world might have some benefits. First of all,
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mitigate
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the huge gap between
privilaged
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privileged
and deprived communities so as to
conveniant
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convenient
access to
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the smae
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smae
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same
facilities. It means people benefit
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access to fashioned and latest productions of
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their
needs.
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, IT students who study in remote areas have
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to prepare
cut-edaged
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cut-edged
MAC Book
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Laptop
from
nearest
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the nearest
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local shops as other ones who live in the
vacinity
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vicinity
of Apple manufacturers
.
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,
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trend contributes
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poverty and inequality
of
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countries
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. On the other side, globalization provides
same
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the same
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produtions
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products
in global markets which could bring about adverse effects to many
countries
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. From
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viewpoint,
this
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approach adversely affects
local
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manufactured things.
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, governments and local
manufactureres
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manufacturers
will suffer from economic recessions
as a result
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of foreign
products
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availability in the long run. From
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prespective
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perspective
, numerous
countries
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would
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expreince
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experience
lack
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a lack
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of cultural diversity.
Globalized
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The globalized
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population
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populations
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are more likely to prefer global tastes and trends
prevalance
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prevalence
prevalent
in local retails rather than
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the traditions
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and customs of
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their owns
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owns
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countries
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.
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,
however
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,
globaly
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globally
global
access to similar products may reduce differences between rich and poor, oppositely,
this
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can develop bad consequences like loss
diversity
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of diversity
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of cultures and financial recession.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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