Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there have been two opinions in the society. Some
of
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people
think that it has advantages to make products more famous, while
others think that believe
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this
situation does not affect people
’s decisions when they buy new things. In my opinion, advertising has huge
impact on shopping.
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people
believe that advertising has no effect on commerce. The reason of
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for
this
is that nowadays many companies prepare advertisements. That is
why individuals do not pay attention these
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, there are many ads in
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situation gets on their nerves.
On the other hand
, there are many people
who think that when companies promote their new products, it influences people
’s thoughts about buying. Personally, I agree
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agree with
this
statement. Companies try so hard to announce their new things excellently because they see the differences between bad and good PRs. For instance
, if the advertisements are creative, they can be easily noticed by people
. As a result
, sales can increase. In addition
, promotion places are essential too. When the banners of products can be seen simply, it can work on people
more. For instance
, these places can be bus stations. There are many people
in those places. More people
mean more tendencies. So it shows that high quality
promotions can effortlessly affect persons.
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people
think that advertising does not have any advantages for attract
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while
others believe that it has significant
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According to
my point of view, well-prepared promotions can change people
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