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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Recently, there have been two opinions in the society. Some
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people
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 think that it has advantages to make products more famous,
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 others think that
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this
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 situation does not affect
people
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’s decisions when they buy new things. In my opinion, advertising has
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 impact on shopping. On the
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 hand, some
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 believe that advertising has no effect on commerce. The reason
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 is that nowadays many companies prepare advertisements.
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 why individuals do not pay attention
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 kinds of presentations.
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, there are many ads
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 social media platforms. Despite that, social media users just ignore them and continue their business. Sometimes
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 situation gets on their nerves.
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, there are many
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 who think that when companies promote their new products, it influences
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’s thoughts about buying. Personally, I
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 statement. Companies try so hard to announce their new things excellently because they see the differences between bad and good PRs.
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, if the advertisements are creative, they can be easily noticed by
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.
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, sales can increase.
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, promotion places are essential too. When the banners of products can be seen simply, it can work on
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 more.
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, these places can be bus stations. There are many
people
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 in those places. More
people
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 mean more tendencies. So it shows that
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 promotions can effortlessly affect persons. In conclusion, some
people
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 think that advertising does not have any advantages for
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attention
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 of individuals,
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 others believe that it has
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 impact on trade.
According to
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people
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’s opinions.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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