Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, there have been two opinions in the society. Some
of
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people
think that it has advantages to make products more famous,
while
others think that
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this
situation does not affect
people
’s decisions when they buy new things. In my opinion, advertising has
huge
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impact on shopping. On the
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hand, some
people
believe that advertising has no effect on commerce. The reason
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this
is that nowadays many companies prepare advertisements.
That is
why individuals do not pay attention
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kinds of presentations.
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, there are many ads
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social media platforms. Despite that, social media users just ignore them and continue their business. Sometimes
this
situation gets on their nerves.
On the other hand
, there are many
people
who think that when companies promote their new products, it influences
people
’s thoughts about buying. Personally, I
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this
statement. Companies try so hard to announce their new things excellently because they see the differences between bad and good PRs.
For instance
, if the advertisements are creative, they can be easily noticed by
people
.
As a result
, sales can increase.
In addition
, promotion places are essential too. When the banners of products can be seen simply, it can work on
people
more.
For instance
, these places can be bus stations. There are many
people
in those places. More
people
mean more tendencies. So it shows that
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promotions can effortlessly affect persons. In conclusion, some
people
think that advertising does not have any advantages for
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attention
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of individuals,
while
others believe that it has
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impact on trade.
According to
my point of view, well-prepared promotions can change
people
’s opinions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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