The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the
number
of individuals who went to the different types of museums in London from June to October 2015.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors varied significantly during the Use synonyms
months
, Use synonyms
while
in the History, National and British museums the quantity increased until August and Linking Words
then
decreased. Science Linking Words
museum
started to drop in September.
In June, the most visited Use synonyms
museum
is the Science Use synonyms
Museum
with approximately 430,000 visitors, in the next Use synonyms
month
the Use synonyms
number
fell by around 30,000, in August it grew again by 10,000, in the fifth Use synonyms
month
it rocketed to 500,000, but in the Use synonyms
last
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month
it went down to 300,000. The British Use synonyms
Museum
started the period with nearly 420,000, it jumped rapidly to more or less 710,000 in August, but it started to decline in September and October to under 600,000 and 450,000 respectively.
The History Use synonyms
Museum
remained the Use synonyms
number
of visitors during the two first Use synonyms
months
, was approximately 400,000, in August it reached its highest point at 600,000 but Use synonyms
then
it started to drop to 390,000 and 250,000 in the Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
months
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the National Linking Words
Museum
had during the Use synonyms
months
of June and July around 200,000 people, it climbed by 100,000 in the next Use synonyms
month
, afterwards, in September it went down to 200,000, in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
month
the Use synonyms
number
of people was still decreasing, ending the period with 180,000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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